Voice Over
This is the voice over that we have written for the male character within our film. We want our opening sequence to be quite heart clenching and we want the voice over in particular to draw the audience in. After writing down many idea's about what this character could say which would be the most effective, we all came to an agreement that these idea's fitted best in relation to the action that takes place when they are watching the films opening. In the first few shots, we will be showing various angle's in our female character's room getting a text and then getting ready; doing her hair, makeup, jewellery etc. Whilst this is being shown we will have the voice over begin so that you can hear the male character in the background at most times, speaking about the love of his life and a loss of something (Evie). We want the audience to be taking note of what the male character is saying in the background as he's voice speaks over the soft music which, as it picks up, starts to come to an end and then picks up as the music becomes quieter again. When we did practise shot's and filming, we found that when we put the action together with the voice over, too much was going on so we are thinking removed some of the voice over so that the audience can focus on the action for a while rather what the character is saying. The action taking place will be able to be followed on from what the male character has been saying so the audience will be able to interpret for themselves what is going on.
We felt that the voice over will give the opening sequence the romantic mood and sad emotion that we want to potray within our opening and i also feel that it makes ti easier for the audience to interpret what is going on if there is a voice over to listen to as well as the action taking place. With too much of the voice over on whilst the action is being shown, the audience will get confused as they wont know what part of the opening to focus on which is why we are only using some parts of the script, not all of it.
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LINES BEING USED A
LINES NOT BEING USED A
They say its better to have loved and lost,
than never to have loved at all [PAUSE]
You were my first and my last love [PAUSE]
My only love.
The very first thing i think about when i wake up,
and the very last thing i think about before i go to sleep [SHORT PAUSE]
is you.
I lie awake at night, thinking [SHORT PAUSE]
Thinking about what could have been.
I couldnt imagine me, withought you
And my heart being only half full [PAUSE]
I'll never forget that very day we met, one of my favourite memories [SHORT PAUSE]
You looked at me, straight into my eyes [SHOT PAUSE]
my soul... right through me.
You gave me your everything, and i never said thank you for that [SHORT PAUSE]
I thought i might get one more chance [PAUSE]
And now i'll never have a chance.
You were beautiful [PAUSE] body, mind and soul.
[LAUGHS] what would you think of me now?
The very first moment i met you, i knew id have to have you.
But i never thought i'd have to lose you. [LAUGHS]
When you smiled [SHORT PAUSE] so innocent, so sweet.
The dimples in your cheeks, the way you fluttered your big blue eyes. [SHORT PAUSE]
You never ceized to amaze me.
I wish i could hold you forever, i wish i could hold you in my arms.
You really did teach me how to live [PAUSE]
But whats the point in living an empty life.
You brought meaning, to my life. [PAUSE]
I'm always reminicing out story, how could i forget our beautiful story? [LONG PAUSE]
And the rest is history.. [TITLE]
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